France's latest work
I'm posting this message for France, because she wasn't able to add it to the blog yesterday.
Here is the complete message about the work done yesterday. If you
have any question please don't hesitate to email me or to post a
message on this blog: Today I looked through the home page and checked
for any typos & errors:
ACCUEIL:
Line 1: (starting with) débuts...la Concile change for (=) le Concile
line 3: en France ...auparavent = auparavant
Under "AU SUJET"
SCHÉMA:
Do we have more than one schéma here? should we add a 's' to the title
SCHEMA?
INSTRUCTIONS
line 4: On peut accéder... ù change for (=) où
...ils sont listés;on = listés; on (add a space after semi-colon)
...peut cliquer sur les entêtes = en-têtes
ENCODAGE
2. TEXTES AUTONOMES
LES TEXTES
line 1: Les textes autonomes...documents tel que = tels ...grand texte
telle = tel...
PRINCIPES DE BALISAGE
line 2: <div>: ... et d'autres <div>s = should we keep the s? The
plural form sounds weird to to me.
... Les éléments <div> element = '<div> element' I wonder if we should
italicise <div> element or put quotation mark?
line 3: l'attribut n = 'n' This n sound smaller than it suppose to be,
also do we neen to put it in quotation or to italicise ?
line 4: L'élément <head> est utilisée = utilisé
line 9: Pour des structures...des éléments peuvent être insérées =
insérés
line 15: <hi>:...un texte en caractères tels que = caractères
spécifiques tels que... Maybe we need to add 'spécifiques'?
line 17 : L'étiquette est utilisé = utilisée
2.1. Pour les notes = 2. Pour les notes
lines 12:<list> et <item>: ... aparaissent = apparaissent
ANALYSE DE TEXTES
line 1: L'index... aux versions texte = versions 'texte' or italicised
line 3: plus...et nous fournirons prochainement des liens pertinents
aux textes = plus... et des liens pertinents aux textes seront
disponibles prochainement. I think it sounds better this way.
I also noticed when we go on DOCUMENT then 'gravure' page and we point
to the 1st image, the title that appears for a few seconds has a typo
Présage malheurux = malheureux
