1) MH helped me to figure out how to get rid of line breaks occurring in the text where they shouldn't be. This is done by adding

margin-bottom: 0

or

margin-top: 0; margin-bottom: 0

in the <lg> tag.

2) Discovered that the word "FIN" in line 4008 was not center-aligned. The reason for this was because "text-align: center" was inside the <hi> tag instead of the <p> tag. MH showed me how to fix this with

<p rend="text-align: center"><hi rend="letter-spacing: 0.2em">FIN.</hi></p>

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MH, please update my changes to the sonnet. Thanks!